In “When Grumpy Met Sunshine,” Charlotte Stein crafts a steamy opposites-attract romance with entertaining banter and a fake dating twist, but the emotional connection between the characters feels somewhat lacking.
Acknowledgments:
Thank you to St.Martin’s Press, Macmillan Audio and Netgalley for the DRC of the ebook and audiobook. The thoughts and opinions expressed here are my own.
From The Publisher:
A steamy, opposites-attract romance with undeniable chemistry between a grumpy retired footballer and his fabulous and very sunshine-y ghostwriter.
When grumpy ex-footballer Alfie Harding gets badgered into selling his memoirs, he knows he’s never going to be able to write them. He hates revealing a single thing about himself, is allergic to most emotions, and can’t imagine doing a good job of putting pen to paper.
And so in walks curvy, cheery, cute as heck ghostwriter Mabel Willicker, who knows just how to sunshine and sass her way into getting every little detail out of Alfie. They banter and bicker their way to writing his life story, both of them sure they’ll never be anything other than at odds.
But after their business arrangement is mistaken for a budding romance, the pair have to pretend to be an item for a public who’s ravenous for more of this Cinderella story. Or at least, it feels like it’s pretend―until each slow burn step in their fake relationship sparks a heat neither can control. Now they just have to is this sizzling chemistry just for show? Or something so real it might just give them their fairytale ending?
My Thoughts:
“When Grumpy Met Sunshine” presents a steamy narrative, exploring the dynamic between the grumpy retired footballer Alfie Harding and the lively ghostwriter Mabel Willicker. The story hinges on their undeniable chemistry as they navigate the challenges of revealing Alfie’s life story. While the premise is promising, my overall experience with the book left me with mixed feelings.
The novel delves into the opposites-attract trope, injecting humor and banter into the interactions between Alfie and Mabel. The narrative cleverly employs the fake dating scenario, adding an entertaining twist to the plot. Emily Spowage’s narration, with its raspy quality, contributes a raw and engaging element that complements the story’s tone.
However, my main concern lies in the execution of the romance. Despite the numerous steamy scenes, the connection between Mabel and Alfie felt somewhat underdeveloped. The focus on intimate moments seemed to overshadow the emotional depth needed to convincingly portray a romantic relationship. This imbalance gave the impression of a narrative leaning more towards a developing friendship rather than a couple in the throes of love.
The limited backstories for both characters contributed to this lack of emotional investment. A more comprehensive exploration of their pasts could have enriched the narrative, providing readers with a deeper understanding of the protagonists and enhancing the authenticity of their connection.
On a positive note, the banter between Mabel and Alfie was a highlight. Mabel’s ability to coax Alfie into revealing the necessary details for his memoir added a layer of charm to their interactions. The fake dating aspect was also enjoyable, injecting a dose of humor and intrigue into the storyline.
In conclusion, “When Grumpy Met Sunshine” offers a mix of entertaining elements, from witty banter to a cleverly implemented fake dating plot. However, the lack of a compelling romantic connection and limited character backstories left the overall impression somewhat flat. Despite these shortcomings, Emily Spowage’s narration adds a unique dimension to the audiobook, enhancing the raw and engaging quality of the story.
Jody
I almost picked this book on NetGalley but passed. I am happy I did now. Thank you for sharing this review, Jodie!
thathappyreader
Thanks for reading Jody!
Her Digital Coffee
Great review, Jodie! Backstories and character development is so important. It’s too bad this story lacked in that department and made it seem more like it was headed towards a friendship. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
thathappyreader
Thanks for reading Winnie!
Fransic verso
Amazing review and a lovely book, its a romance season and this would be perfect to start reading. Thank you for sharing!
thathappyreader
Thank you Fransic!
Lisa Mandina (Lisa Loves Literature)
Sad to hear there were some issues with this, although great banter might win me over in the end! Thanks for the review!
thathappyreader
Thanks for reading Lisa.